In my dream last night
I found myself in a canoe
Everything seemed alright
But I didn’t know what I knew
The canoe was in the water
And I was fast asleep
I floated out even farther
Into the water so deep
A strange lizard cloud in the sky
It was a sight that took away my breath
I didn’t realize I was about to die –
“A dream of a canoe is a dream of death.”
A poem | by Jason S. Sullivan, 08-30-19
Based on the short story “Puowaina” by Alan Brennert. “Puowaina” appears in Twilight Zone – 19 Original Stories on the 50th Anniversary, edited by Carol Serling.
In his story, Mr. Brennert explains that the appearance of a lizard, or a mo’o, is thought to be an ill omen in Hawaiian lore. Hawaiians also believe that dreaming of a canoe can represent death.
Jason S. Sullivan 
Lovely poem, Jason, glad my story inspired you to write it!
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Thank you, Mr. Brennert! I’m honored that you visited my humble website. Your story had a poetic feel to it, and it caught my imagination.
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I’ve shared a link to this page on my Facebook pages so maybe you’ll see some responses from that too. Good luck with your writing!
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Thank you so much! I appreciate that.
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